I am poem

I am…

Success Criteria

Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns

Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am eel man

I wonder if they will government will stop commercial fishing ?

I hear  jet skeas(skiers) racing in the river mouth

I see kahawai jumping in the surf

I want to go fishing every day

I am eel man

I don't pretend

I feel water splashing around my legs when  cast my surf caster

I touch my cast net

I worry if I might in the swift channel get washed into the waves

I would cry if all eels diy

I am eel man

I understand how to save the fish in New zealand

I say nothing                                        

I dream of catching the biggest eel in the world

I am eel man

I have been working on writing a poem.Something I am proud of my poem because I have made people think about the fish. I tried to choose the best nouns adjectives and verbs. I hope that people will put some fish back when they go fishing and look after the fish.